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Yeah Write #3: Microstory #241 – Outriders

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Dust assaulted.  Two horses in braided, bit-less bridles hung head to hoof.  Riders pulled brims low, bandanas high, and duster collars straight.

“You’re barkin’ at knots.”

The other dug, found the panel, placed her hand upon the biolock and said,  “Balls out.”

 

 

6 comments on “Yeah Write #3: Microstory #241 – Outriders

  1. ReallyGina1 (@ReallyGina1)
    November 25, 2015

    At first I had a Cormac McCarthy vibe. Two things caught me off guard. I am assuming “her” is a cowGIRL (woman) and the bio-lock. You turned all dystopian on us. Cool!

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    • Laissez Faire
      November 25, 2015

      Yes 🙂 Glad the dystopian theme came across. 42 words is tight!

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  2. Tina
    November 25, 2015

    Nicely done! I liked the twist at the end, and the dialogue.

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    • Laissez Faire
      November 25, 2015

      Thank you 🙂 when I was paring down that word count, I refused to touch the dialogue. 🙂

      Like

  3. Donna-Louise Bishop
    November 26, 2015

    Great job. Thanks for sharing 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Joe Ormerod
    November 27, 2015

    Loved the twist at the end, the dichotomy of old west and biolocks!

    Like

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