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Yeah Write #34: Velvet (#haiku #amwritingpoetry)

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Pocks mark the green moss;

Bark rended from the trees hangs

where a young buck rubbed.

 

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8 comments on “Yeah Write #34: Velvet (#haiku #amwritingpoetry)

  1. Cyn K
    March 17, 2016

    The title is delightful.

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    • Laissez Faire
      March 17, 2016

      Thanks! I hemmed and hawed over it wondering if it was too vague, but moss is kind of velvet and the velvet on deer is very specifically a spring thing…so… I stuck with it 🙂

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  2. innatejames
    March 17, 2016

    For some reason, I always feel like I’m intruding when I stumble into a place where I know a deer has been.

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    • Laissez Faire
      March 17, 2016

      I tend to feel more of “how did this happen without me noticing”. LOL We get deer in our yard sometimes. There are holes and rubbed bark everywhere… yet we hardly ever actually see them.

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  3. Jennifer G. Knoblock
    March 17, 2016

    The few details open a whole scene in my mind, so visual; an intimate moment with nature.

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    • Laissez Faire
      March 17, 2016

      The picture is actually from my backyard. 🙂 I was out yesterday raking up leaves and noticed my favorite mossy spots were messed up by deer tracks.

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  4. rubybastille
    March 17, 2016

    Lovely and full of detail! And the title is perfect.

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    • Laissez Faire
      March 17, 2016

      I appreciate you saying so! I was unsure about the title, so I’m glad it worked for you 🙂

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