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Yeah Write #13: Rube Goldberg Retribution


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I have a particular set of skills not ordinarily useful.   But give me a lying, cheating boyfriend, a crammed closet I said to clean a thousand times, and a bowling ball — and I will give you a Wilhelm Scream and broken foot.



11 comments on “Yeah Write #13: Rube Goldberg Retribution

  1. Joe Ormerod
    December 30, 2015

    OUCH! I’m completely “Taken” with your opening! LOL

    Liked by 1 person

    • Laissez Faire
      December 30, 2015

      Haha. I wondered if anyone would notice that! FYI, I searched in vain for an image of a Krull themed bowling ball. LOL


  2. Christine
    December 30, 2015

    A well-planned vengeance – I love it.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Laissez Faire
      December 30, 2015

      I must be in a mood today to have that as a thought for a story. LOL

      Liked by 1 person

      • charlotte833
        December 30, 2015

        Moods make for great writing inspiration! Premeditated revenge is the best. I had to Google Wilhelm scream. Neat detail.

        Liked by 1 person

      • Laissez Faire
        December 30, 2015

        Thank you 🙂 It’s really hard to work that scream into text and sound natural.. Always wanted to do it though. LOL


  3. jhiabeys
    December 30, 2015

    That’s gotta hurt.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Michael
    December 31, 2015

    I loved the Wilhelm Scream reference. I also love the Wilhelm Scream. It’s so evocative, and instantly recognizable. 🙂


  5. Meg
    December 31, 2015

    Perfect retribution!


  6. livebysurprise
    December 31, 2015



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