Yeah Write #13: Rube Goldberg Retribution
I have a particular set of skills not ordinarily useful. But give me a lying, cheating boyfriend, a crammed closet I said to clean a thousand times, and a bowling ball — and I will give you a Wilhelm Scream and broken foot.
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OUCH! I’m completely “Taken” with your opening! LOL
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Haha. I wondered if anyone would notice that! FYI, I searched in vain for an image of a Krull themed bowling ball. LOL
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A well-planned vengeance – I love it.
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I must be in a mood today to have that as a thought for a story. LOL
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Moods make for great writing inspiration! Premeditated revenge is the best. I had to Google Wilhelm scream. Neat detail.
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Thank you 🙂 It’s really hard to work that scream into text and sound natural.. Always wanted to do it though. LOL
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That’s gotta hurt.
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Revenge is a dish best served painfully sometimes. LOL
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I loved the Wilhelm Scream reference. I also love the Wilhelm Scream. It’s so evocative, and instantly recognizable. 🙂
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Perfect retribution!
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Ouch!
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